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Here is the description for Capture:
Every family has its secrets. Some are just more costly than others.This book holds a special place in my heart. It was the first full length novel that I ever wrote. I managed to complete the first draft during NaNoWriMo 2010. That draft was complete at a little over 50,000 words. The current edition is over 70,000 words... so yeah, it has been reworked quite a bit. But I think it is for the best.
Autumn Stone has spent her entire life in Lunica City, a home for those with the gift of magic. It was a place of freedom, a place of happiness, a place that she considered to be a part of her. Until a stranger destroyed that illusion with one single action.
He holds the key to who she really is.
But he also holds the ability to destroy her.
The city as Autumn knows it to be no longer exists. It is buried beneath pain, fire, and death. A haunting shadow of the place she once called home.
As secrets are revealed, and powers are tested, Autumn will have to risk everything that she has left in order to protect her loved ones.
But safety comes with a price.
Capture is a lot different from my other projects. The biggest difference is that it is set in a made up world. The second is that it's a mixed bag of nuts, meaning that it doesn't really fall into one genre.
The way this story is written is also quite different from my other books.
That is because it is my first book, but also because the setting forced me to write it differently. I needed to visualized the setting through words as much as possible. (I tried, but we'll see if I actually succeeded.) It's a strange world, one full of tons of possibilities, and I hope to one day have the time to sit down and draw out a few scenes.
Since this book is so different, I figured I'd talk about a few things in the book that may be of interest to some of you:
1. The secondary characters (mainly women) play a big part in the story. This is Autumn's story, yes, but like with the Emile Reed Chronicles, the story is also bigger than her. So I like to think that the secondary characters aren't just one dimensional, or there solely just to be there. I like to tie in family to my books, and for me, Autumn and the gang are one big dysfunctional family.
2. It is a story about magic and witches, but it isn't your typical witch story. Actually, here's a fun fact: I initially set out to write a story kind of like the Craft, and somehow, Capture was what I came up with.
3. Autumn was originally the main character in my [now shelved] vampire story, Crave. That was a book I realized just wasn't working after I'd managed to write 20k words. I have every intention of reworking Crave after I finish up my projects for 2014, but the story will obviously end up changing quite a bit.
4. Release, the conclusion to Autumn's story, will be out in 2015. I haven't started writing it yet, and I probably won't until the end of the year, but I'm thinking of writing it from Ian's POV. I've found it is easier for me to write from his POV than it is for me to tap back into Autumn's POV after four years. (Seriously, a lot harder than I thought it would be.) No promises just yet, but that is what I'm leaning towards!
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Want to read the first chapter? Follow the cut!
PROLOGUE
Ian
No
matter how hard I ran, it never stopped.
It
wrapped its forceful arms around me, trying to pull me underneath its
all-consuming hold. Pain had a way of doing that – of completely destroying a
person. But this time, I wouldn’t give in.
I
had to remind myself why I was doing this.
I
had to remember that this was for her.
I
could push past the pain if it meant I had a chance to know her. She was a
buried secret from my past, one that held the key to my future.
A
future that I’d risk everything to know.
CHAPTER
ONE
June 16th, 2025
Autumn
The
town center buzzed with life. Children, dressed in black jeans and white t-shirts, ran amongst the stands oblivious
to the people surrounding them. The adults watched on, smiling as the children
played. And the guards, having
assumed their positions in front of the Command Center gates, stood ready
for any sign
of a threat. Not that one ever
came. It was
just their way of maintaining the peace.
Everything
seemed normal.
That
was until a strange young, man took
to the front of the Command Center.
Lunica
City was a small place. Everyone knew everyone, but him? He wasn’t
from here. He was an outsider, a stranger. One that wasn’t welcome within the city’s gates.
I
could sense his anger, and
his hatred, and given the way
the children had run away
from him, I knew they could,
as well.
He
stood tall with hair black as night, skin pale as could be, and muscles that would intimidate even the
strongest of Lunica City's guards.
“Is
something wrong?” he asked the onlookers.
A tight grin
stretched upon his lips as he turned to look
at the people gathered outside of the Command
Center.
Some
had managed to look away long
enough to run back home.
But
it was hard
for me to ignore the burning hatred that was visible in his eyes.
I
watched as he stepped closer to a small group of bystanders. “I’m sorry, was
I not loud enough the first time?”
The anger in his voice managed to illicit goosebumps
throughout my body. “Is something wrong?”
“No,
no…” one woman
responded nervously, lowering her head to avoid making eye
contact with the towering figure. She wore
a black dress, and her grey hair hung
loosely around her fear ridden face.
He
leaned forward, gripping her chin between his fingers, forcing her to look up at him. “Nothing is wrong,”
she said, her words much weaker
than I was sure she’d intended them to be. “We mean you no
disrespect.”
At
that, I chuckled to myself. She was
apologizing for his behavior.
She was apologizing because we had
felt uncomfortable in his presence. It was
maddening, especially considering he was
the psychopath that had made himself welcome
in our city – in
our home.
“Our
sincerest apologies,” she said, fumbling over her words as she spoke,
his hand still gripping her chin. Had she not shivered
in fear under his hold, her words might have seemed
believable.
The
man grinned, tossing the woman
towards the ground, causing her head to smack against the concrete floor. “Do not claim to
mean me no disrespect if you’re only going to lie to me.”
A
few of the guards
ran forward dressed in black armor, wielding large white guns that beamed with a soft blue light. “Identity yourself,”
one of the guards demanded, pressing his gun against the stranger’s
left temple. When the man
remained quiet, he pulled back
on the trigger ever slowly, trying to force an answer out of him.
“I
wouldn’t do that if I were you.”
A menacing smile
tugged at the corners of his mouth.
Both
anger and pleasure
rolled off of him, making it evident
just how dangerous
he truly was.
He held no
sense of fear; no sense of sympathy for the terror
he had inflicted
upon the crowd. Not an ounce.
He
took pride in their cowering because he knew
that meant he
was in control.
“Identify
yourself immediately,” the guard repeated. His tone was harsh
and commanding, but that didn’t
seem to matter to the stranger.
He
lowered his head, ignoring the guard’s
command. His arms rose from their resting place at his sides. He stretched them out in front of him as though to create a shield.
I
stood in place, unable to move; reluctant
to take my eyes off of the strange man.
It almost felt
as though there was some sort of pull
between us, and no matter how hard
I tried to fight it, I couldn’t break the connection.
It
hadn’t helped that I was curious
– and yet terrified – of his actions.
What the hell is he doing?
I thought.
Orange
sparks of magic radiated around his body, creating the illusion
that he was
on fire. The others looked on in awe. Not because what
he had done
was something special, but because they
realized he was just getting
started.
All
logic in my mind was telling me to run – to get the
hell out of there before it was too
late. But I didn’t move. My feet
were glued to the gravel beneath me. My eyes locked on the
terrifying stranger.
I
stared at his face, trying to make sense
of who he was.
The chiseled jaw, the sunken eyes…I’d never seen him before
in my life, but yet I had felt
as though I’d known him.
Maybe
that sounded a bit insane. And
really, it did.
But it was
the truth.
There
was something familiar about
him; something that I just
couldn’t shake.
He
raised his head, forcing his eyes to meet my curious stare. He gazed at me questioningly, a slight hint of pain
visible on his face. I tried to look into his mind, but the
images I found were not the ones
I’d hoped to see.
A curious
one, are you? His voice
filled my thoughts.
I
eyed him suspiciously, allowing
him to feed me whatever information he would allow me to see.
“Lucas,”
a woman whispered. “Come now, I’ll protect you.”
I
wasn’t sure who the woman
was, although there was a familiar ring
to her voice. But at least now, I’d had
a name for the
crazed stranger.
That
should have been enough to comfort me, but the revelation
had only made
my concern grow. There weren’t exactly that
many residents named Lucas within Lunica
City. In fact, there was only one that I could currently recall hearing about.
A
relative of Official Agnes.
Lucas
Milfred.
Sparks
emerged from the tips of his fingers. Lucas spun around, breaking
our connection in an instant.
He
threw his hands forward causing the
sparks to launch out towards the stunned bystanders.
They didn’t react. They didn’t
even attempt to move. Not that
it mattered much, really. Even
if they did
try to run away,
there was no way they would have been able to escape.
He
was far too
powerful.
We
were used to magic. It flowed
through our veins. It buzzed in our cores. It made us who
we were. So in all actuality, we
should have been able to protect ourselves
against him.
But
we weren’t used
to residents using magic against one another outside of training.
We
were supposed to be safe inside of Lunica City.
Things
like this were not supposed to happen. We were not prepared
for attacks on our people by one of our own residents – not at this scale, at least. Others that attempted to hurt another being were
quickly banished outside of the city. But
those attacks were incredibly rare,
and they’d never
endangered nearly as many people as this
one had.
The
guards stood by unsure of what to do. The fifteen people
the man had
struck stood frozen, their bodies lit up by the sparks
that burned beneath their skin.
As the sparks
ran their course, their bodies slumped to the ground, shattering
into pieces.
Fifteen
lives destroyed for no reason
what-so-ever.
Fifteen
of my fellow residents turned into unidentifiable remnants.
We
stood there stunned, unable to make sense of what
was going on around us. I wanted to run, to get away, but
my feet remained planted firmly in the dirt below.
Once
the initial shock of the attack
wore off, the
guards moved in on the stranger. The guard that still
remained at the man’s side from before
was preparing to pull the trigger when
the man knocked
him to the ground. “I warned you, did
I not?” He kicked the gun out of the
guard’s hand and positioned himself so that he
hovered above the guard. “I’m not going
to kill you. That wouldn’t be right. After all, you may be of use to me someday.”
He
slapped the guard’s face teasingly before easing himself to his feet.
The
other guards were ready and
waiting. They grabbed a hold of his wrists the second he
took to his feet. One of them
lunged forward with a collar, securing it
tightly around the man’s neck. “There will be no more of this.” He
gestured towards the shattered remains aligning the town
center. “You will be relocated to Ubiera, and you will be banned
from ever stepping foot in
Lunica City again, do you understand?”
The
man laughed it off. “We’ll see.” He turned to face
me as the guards led him toward the gate that surrounded the city. When
he noticed that
I was staring, he winked before blowing
a kiss in my direction.
What a freaking creep, man.
I probably should have blocked my thoughts because, given the
humorous smirk that covered his lips, he knew exactly
what I’d been thinking.
The
gate to the city slammed shut
as they made their way to the world
outside, and I found myself wondering
what the heck had just happened.
Danger wasn’t
a well acquainted companion inside of the walls of Lunica City. Murder wasn’t something that we’d found ourselves
dealing with too often. And yet,
I’d just watch fifteen of my
fellow residents die at the hands of an individual
that had been given shelter here.
How
could he do something so terrible and
not feel even the slightest bit
of remorse for his actions? I just couldn’t comprehend it.
But
I was sure that
this wasn’t the last of the
horror that we’d experience at the hand of the
man. He would be back. I could only hope that it’d
be later rather than sooner.
One
of the guards turned around, and
pointed at the remains that surrounded us. I watched as the piles
of remains swirled into the air, lifting
off the ground with ease, before vanishing into thin air.
There
was nothing left to show what
had happened. A swift cover-up operation,
I was sure. This was something they’d have to take
care of before the other
residents heard what had happened.
And I couldn’t say that I’d blamed them in that retrospect. Death
wasn’t something that people took lightly.
And
it wouldn’t help to ease their worries if they knew
the truth.
The
guards had already
led Lucas out of the city, and far
from the gate. The innocent lives
that he’d stolen?
They would become nothing more than memories. There was nothing to tell, nothing
to show, and they would do their best to keep it
that way.
We
were always told that we
would be safe within the city.
If the news
of the day’s events managed to seep out, people would panic, and they couldn’t allow that to happen. Life
needed to continue on. They needed the residents to go
about their normal routine. But fifteen living bystanders having bore witness to the
truth, there was still plenty that needed to be sorted out.
We
would need to be taken care of.
Killing
us would’ve been the easy choice, of course,
but then they would have needed
to explain how thirty residents disappeared without a trace. Sure, if
they were desperate,
they could announce that we’d all been
banished, but banishments were rare
inside of the city. There was no way
in hell they’d be able to justify something like that to the other
residents, at least, not
without creating another mess that they’d
need to clean up.
The
iron-wrought gates that surrounded
the Command Center opened up.
“Would someone like to explain
what exactly is going on out here?” Official Agnes’ voice pierced the haunting
silence. She looked out at among us, waiting for a response.
But
no one answered
her.
And
honestly? I didn’t expect anyone to do so.
“Come
here.” She pulled
a young boy forth, placing her hands on the sides
of his face. She closed her eyes, searching
for an answer hidden away inside of his thoughts. The atmosphere
remained quiet as we all waited
for her to speak again. “I see.”
Well,
that wasn’t exactly a comforting response. Especially since her tone
was flat. Anger
was normal for
her, the same went for arrogance,
but for her to convey no
sort of emotion? That wasn’t like the
Official.
She
pulled away from the young boy
and began pacing
in front of the gate. “Have we decided
what to do with them?” The Official sounded disgusted as she pointed
at the group of bystanders, the group
which included me.
Dressed
in a loosely fitted, black lace
dress, her haunting black eyes stood out against her fiery red hair, which fell down to her waist. Just looking at her, it was rather
easy to see that she wasn’t
someone you’d want to deal with unless absolutely necessary. She had
a cool demeanor about her, so I did my best
to keep my distance.
Official
Agnes wasn’t the friendliest of the
guards. She didn’t mind using
her powers to cause pain to others – even though, technically, that was against the rules.
Not that rules
mattered much to her. She worked for
the Command Center, she was an authoritative figure. She could very well do
as she pleased.
And
knowing that she would be in charge of our fate? It definitely
wasn’t a comforting thought. Especially if it was
Lucas Milfred that had been
behind the attack. He was her family; she
had every reason
to care about him. But us? We were expendable.
Behind
Official Agnes, I could hear the
faint sound of footsteps approaching. Commander Willow Ford made his way out to the gathered
crowd, never once saying a word
as he motioned for us to follow him.
The
residents were starting to gather in the city center
and the Officials didn’t want to explain
what had taken
place. The quicker
we were away
from the scene, the better.
We
followed in a line until we were
taken into a dark room located beneath the Command Center. No one knew what
was going on. We were just
doing as we were told in hopes
that it would ensure our safety.
Maybe
it was wishful
thinking, but none of us wanted to die.
Well,
at least I didn’t.
Commander
Willow Ford stopped suddenly
upon reaching a large room, which was freezing
and, for the
most part, empty.
He ordered us to take a seat at the
monstrous metal table located in the
center of the room. It was
the only piece
of furniture inside the room beside the matching
chairs. As we
took our seats at the table, guards
started to come out from the side door
making their way towards our group. Each of them took a position behind a resident.
We
were not leaving anytime soon, that had quickly
become apparent.
The
Commander gave Official Agnes a nod,
and they both
made their way out of the room to discuss
what action they planned on pursuing.
We did not commit
a crime. We were not criminals, but we had
witnessed something that we were not meant
to see. For that reason, we
would be treated as criminals.
Up
until now, no one had ever
been banished from Lunica
City for murder.
Sure,
there were incidents where magic was
misused, and residents were relocated to Ubiera,
but this was
different. This was something the Officials never had to deal
with before. People did not just walk
into the town center and murder
innocent people. Not here.
I
fiddled with my hands, counting
each second as it passed by.
When
Commander Willow and Official Agnes made
their way back into the room, tension
filled the air
as we all awaited
our fate. “The easiest way to handle this
is to perform a simple spell.” The Commander smiled hoping to calm
our fears. “It’s a fairly simple spell,
one that will not hurt you. All we’re going
to do is perform a memory cleanse.”
Could
it actually be that easy? As
long as we agreed
to a memory cleanse, erasing
our memories from earlier today, they would let us go? It
seemed harmless enough, though I was
sure that Official Agnes had nothing to do
with the decision.
If
the Official had her way, we all would’ve been six feet under.
Before
lining us up to proceed with the memory cleanse, the Commander proceeded to see if we had any questions.
One person asked who would be performing the spell. “Official Agnes will be performing the spell,”
he responded. “She is better acquainted with it than the rest
of us.”
You have got to be kidding,
I thought. Images started to find their way into my mind: Official Agnes stood before me, using her powers to torture me. I could feel the blood
as it rushed throughout my veins, my heart nearly
beating out of my chest. Just the idea
of being in a room, alone, with her was terrifying enough.
One
by one, they ushered us into the study.
“Autumn Stone," the Commander shouted.
“You’re next, dear."
Panic
started to set in, and I wanted to run.
I could not stop thinking I was about to walk into a torture trap. Against my
will, I stood up and walked towards the study, occasionally
glancing over my shoulder at the faces of those
who remained seated at the table.
“Sit
down.” Official Agnes had a sly smile
on her face.
I
nodded and lowered
myself into the cold, metal chair.
Overhead a small light hung, swaying
ever so slightly
above my head. “Relax. He is watching everything I do. Even if I wanted
to hurt you, I would not be able to.” She smirked.
I
knew it was
a joke, but there was still a hint
of a threat behind her words.
“What
exactly are you going to do?” I asked.
“I’m just going
to place this on your head.” She lowered
a helmet onto my head. “And then I’ll recite a few words. It
is quite simple.”
“That’s it?”
“Are
you ready?” she asked. Her tone
was harsh, cold.
I
nodded, more than eager to be on my way.
Official
Agnes took it upon herself to
block my hearing with a quick spell. I could see her lips moving
rapidly, but I could not make out a thing she
was saying. My eyelids grew heavy with exhaustion.
I could feel reality slowly falling away
from me as I slowly gave into my body’s desire for rest.
When
I opened my eyes again, I was not sure
what had happened or why I was
in a room with Official Agnes. She
helped me out of the cold, metal chair
I sat in, carefully grabbing a hold of my hand.
I
looked at her, startled as she ushered me to the door of the
study. As soon
as we reached the door, she
released my hand and turned back
towards the chair. “You’re right.” I peered
back at Official Agnes, confused
as to what she could be talking about. “It was Lucas. And he is not finished
yet, he will be back. He will be back
soon.”
I
tried to make sense of what she
was saying, but I could not comprehend any of it. Who
was Lucas, and why did Official Agnes tell me that I was
right? How could I possibly be right when I didn't even
have a clue as to what she was
talking about? I looked back, my face brimming with confusion. Her dark eyes briefly met mine before I was escorted away
by the guards.
I
could hear the urgency in her words.
One
that I did not understand.
My
pulse rate began
to escalate as I began to realize that something was clearly wrong.
I could feel the panic of those sitting
in the lobby. Their eyes were locked
on me curiously as I walked out of the
study. Why were
they all here?
Why was I here?
“We must get going, miss,” one of the guards said, pulling
on my wrist.
We
headed down a small, poorly lit tunnel.
The walls, made
up of granite and brick, were covered in a light condensation. I looked around, expecting
to find some sort of exit ahead,
but there was nothing.
“May
I ask your house number?” The guard
looked at me waiting for an answer.
“460,”
I whispered, knowing he would be able to hear me.
He
turned to his right and pushed in a brick
in the wall. The brick disappeared,
and a lever appeared in its place. Upon the release of the
lever, a silver plate began to form
beneath my feet. I watched in
horror as a plastic shield began to fall
around me. “What is this?” I screamed
out to the guards, but there was not enough time for
an answer. The tunnel opened up above me, and the glass
tube shot up,
bringing me back to my bedroom as if nothing
had happened.
“Autumn?”
I could hear my mother approaching the door.
How
long had I been
gone, and did
she notice? I was not sure what
to tell her if she asked where
I had been as I was not even entirely sure.
I remembered waking up and heading over to Bryn’s house for training,
everything after that was a
blur.
“Autumn.”
My mother knocked on my bedroom door.
“Come
in,” I yelled, knowing that she would enter
even with my permission.
I
expected her to be worried or at least alarmed
since I was not sure how long I’d actually
been gone, but
she wasn't. “How’d training go?” she
asked. “What did the two of you end
up working on?” She was smiling. For
all she knew,
I had actually attended practice with Bryn earlier in the day. The problem was
that I was not sure if
I had or not.
I
did remember heading to Bryn’s for our weekly training session,
but I did not remember making it
there. What was I doing all
morning and why could not I remember? I decided that lying
would be my best option, assuming she would not try to read my thoughts.
I did not need her to worry about me.
“Practice
was good. We
were supposed to work on manipulating elements, but Bryn had somewhere
to be.” She did not seem to buy into what
I was saying, so I decided to be a bit more specific. “But she helped me with my shield. I can extend it further
without hesitation.”
I
tried to keep my voice as calm as possible.
Please do not ask me to show you,
I thought. Unfortunately, I was not any better
with my shield than
I was when I left in the morning.
Go figure.
My
mother smiled at me, which was a comforting sign.
She seemed to believe me. I hated lying to her, but I did not have a choice.
What else was
I supposed to tell her? Oh, I ended up in a room with Official Agnes for some reason and
found myself in a glass tube being
shot into my bedroom. No biggie. Yeah, the truth was probably
not a brilliant idea. She leaned over
and wrapped her arms around me. “I’m proud of you, Autumn. You are advancing so well!”
Her
dark brown hair,
which she wore half up and
half down, stood
out against her fair skin.
Her blue eyes lit up as a smile formed on her lips. My mother was everything I hoped to become. She
was a kind woman
who always sought
the best in people. I felt a tear
escape from the corner of my eye as I thought about how she was everything that I aspired to be.
When
she released me from her grasp, slowly making
her way out of my room, I was glad. I knew
that if she
even so much
as looked at me, I’d have to tell her the truth.
I
waited a moment after she left to make sure
I was truly alone.
As
soon as I was sure she was
gone, I teleported myself
over to Bryn’s. If I could not remember
what happened in the morning, maybe
she would be able to tell me.
I
stood in the middle of my room with my eyes closed. I pictured
Bryn’s house in my mind, a small red house located
near the town center. I could feel my body entering
the other realm
before dropping me at Bryn’s. I knocked
on the door, but there was no
answer. “Bryn?” I called out,
hoping she would respond, but there was nothing.
Bryn
usually kept the door around the
back open, so
I headed towards the back of the house.
But the door
was locked. I turned around, ready
to head home, only to find Official Agnes Woods standing before me. She looked at me curiously. Her eyes were entirely white, drained of their usual pitch black coloring. “If it is
Bryn Thomas you are in search
of, I'm afraid she is gone.”
“And
why should I believe you?” I asked, curious
as to why Official Agnes would be there.
Officials only left the Command Center when there was a problem
to clean up, and Bryn was far from a problem.
She
looked at me with a crooked smile stretching upon her lips. “True. You have
absolutely no reason to trust me, but for once,
I’m not lying to you dear. Bryn truly
is gone, and that is all you
can know, for now."
Before I could ask
anything else Official Agnes, too,
was gone.
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